After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.
Categories: Comedy
Already a member?
16 reviews
After his terminally ill(,) and clinically dead bitch of a wife(,) miraculously revives (herself), a depressed man must find a way to (break) free of his life long commitment.
Marked typos, and a recommendation, with (), otherwise sounds fantastic.
Why can't he just divorce her? I get that he is depressed and unhappy but is he a massive pushover as well? Seems like a pretty thin concept but also a lot of comedy opportunities so make your genre clear as this reads like a thriller.
Why can't he just divorce her? I get that he is depressed and unhappy but is he a massive pushover as well? Seems like a pretty thin concept but also a lot of comedy opportunities so make your genre clear as this reads like a thriller.