Young, desperate criminal Anthony Secorro and his small gang deal with the horrific consequenses of committing a strong-armed robbery during an exorcism.

Try to avoid using character names in your logline.? Consider adding irony. It's normal for criminals to be desperate. And it's normal for them to get in trouble eventually. For example you can make the criminal a man of faith turned to crime.

Try to avoid using character names in your logline.? Consider adding irony. It's normal for criminals to be desperate. And it's normal for them to get in trouble eventually. For example you can make the criminal a man of faith turned to crime.

Good notes above.

What sets the story in motion? What is the one event that motivates them to take action? This event needs to be described in the logline, as it defines the beginning of the story.

Secondly, "...deal with the horrific consequences..." is too vague a description for a goal. These consequences are the stakes for your characters in the story and as such need to be clearly described. Their objective, in light of these stakes, needs to be in the logline, what specifically must they achieve before the story ends?