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Liquid Jim is a screwball comedy about a lonely junk collector who falls for a cautious psychology major with OCD.
I wasn't saying it was. I really don't want this to become an internet flame war over psychological disorders. I'm only here for critiques on my logline, and the girl having PTSD isn't even a definite part of the story,…
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Liquid Jim is a screwball comedy about a lonely junk collector who falls for a cautious psychology major with OCD.
I'm sorry, but the research says you're dead wrong. OCD, hoarding, and a multitude of personality disorders spawn from traumatic events; your grandmother dies, and suddenly you can't stop eating all the time. It's very common. I'm currently to: "After…
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“When the high school band is captured by deranged serial killers, A shy tuba player must use his skills as an eagle scout to survive an online game of kill or be killed.”
After you've explained it a little more thoroughly, I think you've got a good concept together. Questions: 1. Those watching this online - do they know it's real, or are they stereotypical basement trolls super excited over comic/movie violence and…
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Liquid Jim is a screwball comedy about a lonely junk collector who falls for a cautious psychology major with OCD.
I think there's been substantial change and I've found a way to incorporate a lot more of what's going on; more than mostly the incident. Is starting a new thread for a major revision bad form around here?
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Liquid Jim is a screwball comedy about a lonely junk collector who falls for a cautious psychology major with OCD.
Jim is a hoarder, I guess that's a better descriptor than junk collector? As far as keepin them together, I understand what you're saying, and you're right, I'm just not sure where to go with it. I don't like the…
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Liquid Jim is a screwball comedy about a lonely junk collector who falls for a cautious psychology major with OCD.
I've tried a lot of different variations and I liked this one because it was so simple (guess it was too simple in the end). What about: "When he falls for the OCD new girl in town, a lonely junk…
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Liquid Jim is a screwball comedy about a lonely junk collector who falls for a cautious psychology major with OCD.
I don't know though. It's a good thought, but "chronic", at least to me, means weed, and would make me think of a stoner film more than anything. The concept of "liquid" is that he "takes up the volume of…
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A man trying to leave the gang-life is being hunted after his boss discovers he unknowingly introduced an undercover cop into the gang.
I like where this is headed, but it makes me wonder too much what the role of the undercover cop is. Loglines really start to cramp with more than two characters. The man is the protag, the gang boss is…
