A bookstore owner must re-live his father’s murder, stay alive, and protect his friends when the murderer escapes from an asylum transfer.

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Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

>> must re-live his father's murder.

Loglines should focus on the dramatic problem to be solved NOW, in the present tense. ?The dramatic problem NOW is to apprehend and/or kill the murderer. "Re-living the murder" -- whatever that means -- is old business ?Maybe it's a complicating factor in the story proper but it is extraneous for the purpose of a logline.

dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

>> must re-live his father's murder.

Loglines should focus on the dramatic problem to be solved NOW, in the present tense. ?The dramatic problem NOW is to apprehend and/or kill the murderer. "Re-living the murder" -- whatever that means -- is old business ?Maybe it's a complicating factor in the story proper but it is extraneous for the purpose of a logline.