A rookie Intelligence Officer accidentally risks a global incident, when she tries to replace the Foreign Minister of a hostile middle eastern country with an impostor: his secretly homosexual twin brother.

An Intelligence Officer replaces the Foreign Minister of a hostile middle eastern country with... his not-so-secret homosexual twin brother.

- I chopped a lot of the padding. don't need the "tries to". I mean - he's gonna do it ha. Cut the imposter. You might need it. We'll see. I'm just playing around here.

- Hmm still feels like "Dave" crossed with a Sacha Baron Cohen film ha.

- Hopefully, "not-so-secret" suggests he's very clearly gay but will in hilarious situations think it's hidden.

- I agree with Dpg. You might need to push on the stakes.

- Concept has a fish-out-of-water which is good. I don't think being gay is enough though. Perhaps he knows nothing about politics? Perhaps he's a compulsive trouble maker? A drinker? How is this guy gonna make things worse?

Hmm - how about "his not-so-secret homosexual twin brother - a man with a voracious sexual appetite".

or...

"his black sheep twin brother... a not-so-secret homosexual who loves to party."

- Lastly, perhaps you need a "Then"? Then what happens? How does this guy cause trouble and mischief?

Anyways - play around with it. Experiment.

Nothing I say is gospel.

Daryl Rogerson:

Thanks for the additional information.? But it's still unclear what is at stake.? " Risk a global incident" -- I can guess what? that means, but I shouldn't have to.? The logline should tell me.

Daryl Rogerson:

Thanks for the additional information.? But it's still unclear what is at stake.? " Risk a global incident" -- I can guess what? that means, but I shouldn't have to.? The logline should tell me.