After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.

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Judah Ray · Logliner · 465 pts

After his terminally ill(,) and clinically dead bitch of a wife(,) miraculously revives (herself), a depressed man must find a way to (break) free of his life long commitment.

Marked typos, and a recommendation, with (), otherwise sounds fantastic.

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

Why can't he just divorce her? I get that he is depressed and unhappy but is he a massive pushover as well? Seems like a pretty thin concept but also a lot of comedy opportunities so make your genre clear as this reads like a thriller.

Karel Segers · Mentor · 2,810 pts

Why can't he just divorce her? I get that he is depressed and unhappy but is he a massive pushover as well? Seems like a pretty thin concept but also a lot of comedy opportunities so make your genre clear as this reads like a thriller.