after-surviving-a-serial-killer-attack-thanks-to-the-donated-organs-of-three-girls-arata-must-remember-the-identity-of-the-murder-who-attacked-him-while-the-spirits-of-the-girls-of-its-new-organs-fol

Where is the logline?

Noard, if you deleted the logline after receiving comments in the thread, please don't do that again. The point of this website is to learn from each other's experiences - mistakes included.

Foxtrot25 I would say the original poster is afraid of his idea being stolen, yet still wants to refer back to the feedback so he's edited it. It's happened a few times on here before. People are naturally precious and paranoid, I guess.

Foxtrot25 I would say the original poster is afraid of his idea being stolen, yet still wants to refer back to the feedback so he's edited it. It's happened a few times on here before. People are naturally precious and paranoid, I guess.

I'm not seeing anything in the topic. Is it me or was it deleted?

If you want it to be a comedy, why not have the protagonist by majorly unhealthy and has a heart attack and the girls are not only the victims of the serial killer, but as a final humiliation their?organs are harvested to ?keep alive a chain-smoking fry-cook. The girls can't move onto the other side until the unwilling fry cook helps them track down the serial killer.

Tormented?by the ghosts?of the girl who's transplanted heart?saved him, a greasy?fry-cook must track down her serial killer so she can?cross over.

Why must he remember the ID of the murderer? ?To what purpose? What is the objective goal entailed in remembering?

And this is a comedy??? ?What's so funny about a serial murder?