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When a robotics genius goes missing, a jaded, debt-ridden PI who hates androids and whose eye implants are switched off must reanimate his hated android and work together to find the missing man who holds the key to his eyesight being restored and debts wiped.
Interesting. You should focus on one main goal ans nir shelter said. If at the end of the jurney he found a new pair of eyes, even better, that will be cool. Is him really blind? if so, say it clearly, there is no space for doubts in reading a logline.
Interesting. You should focus on one main goal ans nir shelter said. If at the end of the jurney he found a new pair of eyes, even better, that will be cool.
See lessIs him really blind? if so, say it clearly, there is no space for doubts in reading a logline.
When Asian vampires steal an ancient demon?s mask, a museum curator and a bus driver must stop them from bringing the monster back to life.
When Asian vampires steal an ancient demon?s mask, a museum curator team with a manga expert to stop them from bringing the monster back to life
When Asian vampires steal an ancient demon?s mask, a museum curator team with a manga expert to stop them from bringing the monster back to life
See lessWhen Asian vampires steal an ancient demon?s mask, a museum curator and a bus driver must stop them from bringing the monster back to life.
Quality in stories is about the coherence and relation between all the parts. In this logline we are not able to appreciate the relation between the character of the bus driver and the asian vampires. I try to explain... if you said: "When Nazi vampires steal an ancient demon?s mask, a museum curatoRead more
Quality in stories is about the coherence and relation between all the parts. In this logline we are not able to appreciate the relation between the character of the bus driver and the asian vampires. I try to explain… if you said:
See less“When Nazi vampires steal an ancient demon?s mask, a museum curator and a bathroom cleaner must stop them from bringing the monster back to life”. It’s the same! It’s the same story. I have absolutely no arguments to tell which one is the better. And I can come up with a thousand variation without any peculiar interest. You should do this exercise, and after a lot of work you can find the magic combination between story and character.
Good luck!