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After a suicide attempt, a girl meets a man in the psych-ward, claiming to be a captured superhero; she becomes his only hope for survival.
"she becomes his only hope for survival" this is too vague to be used in a logline. "When a suicidal girl meets a inmate claiming to be a superhero, _____________" then what happens? What is the plot? The MC's goal?
“she becomes his only hope for survival” this is too vague to be used in a logline.
“When a suicidal girl meets a inmate claiming to be a superhero, _____________” then what happens? What is the plot? The MC’s goal?
See lessA religious zealot grows the devil in the lab, using him to scare people back to the church, only to loose control of his creation.
"When a devil escapes form a religious zealot's lab, ________________" ... what happens?
“When a devil escapes form a religious zealot’s lab, ________________” … what happens?
See lessWhen a frustrated public servant is fired from his meaningless job, he decides to become a masked vigilante, protecting his neighbourhood.
I want to say this one is my favourite of the 3 loglines you published. There's still A LOT of work to be done, mostly to have a kind of structure and coherence as dpg suggest. Focus about his real, deep, intimate goal: is him fat and he wants to get thinner? Try to focus about his true enemy, the oRead more
I want to say this one is my favourite of the 3 loglines you published. There’s still A LOT of work to be done, mostly to have a kind of structure and coherence as dpg suggest. Focus about his real, deep, intimate goal: is him fat and he wants to get thinner? Try to focus about his true enemy, the one he needs to beat to reach his goal: maybe The Hamburger Man? Try to study the “kick ass” movies, analyze the plots and try to find the loglines, then come back to your idea and try to put doan again your logline.
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