Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
When a bullied kid finds a terrifying but badly wounded alien, he rallies his family and friends to help get it back to it's spaceship.
Blake Snyder said "give me the same thing... only different". Now you have to focus on the second part of the sentence. I'm sure that in your head you know that your movie is different and it can be a good movie but in the logline you have to struggle to include what makes your story original, speciRead more
Blake Snyder said “give me the same thing… only different”. Now you have to focus on the second part of the sentence. I’m sure that in your head you know that your movie is different and it can be a good movie but in the logline you have to struggle to include what makes your story original, special, and compelling, without losing the familiar setting and the tradition of the genre.
See lessA deadly fungus outbreak at a secret UN lab brings special forces soldier to defy his orders to save an old love… and human kind.
Hello, "defy his orders" is too vague, and who is the "old love"? How this concerns the human kind? You can improuve the logline trying to be more specific, add some details, without making it longer.
Hello, “defy his orders” is too vague, and who is the “old love”? How this concerns the human kind? You can improuve the logline trying to be more specific, add some details, without making it longer.
See lessWhen a bullied kid finds a terrifying but badly wounded alien, he rallies his family and friends to help get it back to it's spaceship.
E.T? :)
E.T? 🙂
See less