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  1. Posted: June 5, 2015In: Public

    A young, successful real estate entrepreneur discovers his entire life is controlled by a group of computer programmers.

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    "When a successful real estate entrepreneur discovers his entire life is controlled by a group of computer programmers, he ___________"

    “When a successful real estate entrepreneur discovers his entire life is controlled by a group of computer programmers, he ___________”

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  2. Posted: June 4, 2015In: Public

    A regular teenage girl and a recently divorced 40 year old strike up a relationship only to realize that the 40 year old isn't who he says he is but he is really a sociopath

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    Added an answer on June 4, 2015 at 6:44 pm

    This logline doesn't tell enoght about what we will see in the movie: what happens when the girl discover he's a sociopath?

    This logline doesn’t tell enoght about what we will see in the movie: what happens when the girl discover he’s a sociopath?

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  3. Posted: June 4, 2015In: Public

    A despicable businesswoman frames her husband for her murder and the theft of millions from her charities, then she seduces an abusive Sheikh with the intent of scamming him too, but her old friend and assistant realizes she is being played and decides to take their fortunes for herself.

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    Added an answer on June 4, 2015 at 6:42 pm

    Too complicated for me too. Try to focus about the main character, his final goal and who/what is opposed to this goal.

    Too complicated for me too. Try to focus about the main character, his final goal and who/what is opposed to this goal.

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