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A marked-for-death outlaw rekindles old Dixie Mafia blood feuds after returning to the rogue barrier island of Vengeance on a mission to reclaim what?s his and kill the dirty motherfucker who gunned him down, stole his girl, and built a cocaine empire in the lawless coastal town he once called home.
"On a rogue barrier island off the Georgia coast, " good for me. I'm ok with "dirty moterfucker". It makes me think of a precise kind of movie. More "machete" than scarface. I think its a good logline now. Honestly, the concept is not a killer concept for me but it could be a good movie. Good luck wRead more
“On a rogue barrier island off the Georgia coast, ”
good for me.
I’m ok with “dirty moterfucker”. It makes me think of a precise kind of movie. More “machete” than scarface.
I think its a good logline now. Honestly, the concept is not a killer concept for me but it could be a good movie. Good luck with the writing.
See lessWhen a distrusting telepath learns his whole life has been a lie, he must take on the shadowy agency he works for to uncover his real past.
I like the last version. It's a good logline. I just suggest you to find a better adjective than "troubled". Try to think deeply about your character to find the right word.
I like the last version. It’s a good logline.
See lessI just suggest you to find a better adjective than “troubled”.
Try to think deeply about your character to find the right word.
Brothers battle it out for their senile dad?s inheritance while they encounter unforeseen changes in their DNA due to an alien entity.
I like the idea of combining sf and brother's battle. This is what is interesting for me and in my opinion you should keep it. BUT you have to build a strong link between the two concepts so that it will become One concept. The heritance and the sf element could be combined. for exemple: "When two bRead more
I like the idea of combining sf and brother’s battle. This is what is interesting for me and in my opinion you should keep it. BUT you have to build a strong link between the two concepts so that it will become One concept. The heritance and the sf element could be combined.
for exemple:
“When two brothers found a mysterious sphere at their senile father’s house, they start battle over the inheritance while experiencing strange mutations in their bodies and minds”.
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