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A young British academic visiting America and a besotted underage runaway evade exposure by passing themselves off as uncle and niece while travelling the country together:think Pygmalion/Lolita
And be sure to make clear why this movie is different from "Lolita". Reading you logline I thought the two was a couple like bonnie and clyde, with some kind of complicity.
And be sure to make clear why this movie is different from “Lolita”. Reading you logline I thought the two was a couple like bonnie and clyde, with some kind of complicity.
See lessA young British academic visiting America and a besotted underage runaway evade exposure by passing themselves off as uncle and niece while travelling the country together:think Pygmalion/Lolita
I don't think you can write "think Pygmalion/Lolita" in a logline :) You should write your logline to tell the story so that we can think about the archetypes underneath.
I don’t think you can write “think Pygmalion/Lolita” in a logline 🙂 You should write your logline to tell the story so that we can think about the archetypes underneath.
See lessAn insecure man whose soul communicates with other souls in the spiritual realm of dreams, will need to overcome his fears in order to find and bring back his sister?s soul whose body lies in a coma.
Not bad. I would avoid "spiritual" as the real of dreams is obviously spiritual and cut the comma before will". Maybe you can structure the logline making clear what is the catalyst? "When his sister lapses into a coma, an insecure man whose soul communicates with other souls in the realm of dreamsRead more
Not bad.
I would avoid “spiritual” as the real of dreams is obviously spiritual and cut the comma before will”.
Maybe you can structure the logline making clear what is the catalyst?
“When his sister lapses into a coma, an insecure man whose soul communicates with other souls in the realm of dreams must overcome his fears to find and bring back his sister’s soul.
You could also rewrite “whose soul communicates with other souls” – trying o be more specific and clear.
Check “What Dreams May Come”.
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