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  1. Posted: March 19, 2015In: Public

    In a leisure female-only Utopia where sex is the only taboo, a willful girl must escape from her restrained community to join her lover who has been sent away.

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    Added an answer on March 20, 2015 at 8:48 pm

    I changed the loglin - is it better? By the way - I just learned there's a project to remake logan's run - Ryan Gosling / Winding Refn.

    I changed the loglin – is it better?
    By the way – I just learned there’s a project to remake logan’s run – Ryan Gosling / Winding Refn.

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  2. Posted: March 19, 2015In: Public

    In a leisure female-only Utopia where sex is the only taboo, a willful girl must escape from her restrained community to join her lover who has been sent away.

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    Added an answer on March 19, 2015 at 7:18 pm

    You got a serious point there. I'm sure that I want to build an apparent utopia. This is important for my story. The utopia should be believable and should offer some kind of advantages to the people. It?s more like logan?s run? where everybody is young (therefore over 30 must ?regenerate? in a rituRead more

    You got a serious point there. I’m sure that I want to build an apparent utopia. This is important for my story. The utopia should be believable and should offer some kind of advantages to the people. It?s more like logan?s run? where everybody is young (therefore over 30 must ?regenerate? in a ritual death) than thx1138? where we are clearly in a dystopia. My world is for sure a very pacific community where no one has to work and the basic needs are more than guaranteed (shelter, food…). At the beginning of the movie I want to show a paradise female-world. At first I thought about some kind of drug to compensate the lack of sex. But maybe it’s not enough. Now I come up with another idea. What if it is just virginity which is sacred and therefore penetration is forbidden?

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  3. Posted: March 18, 2015In: Public

    A nostalgic young writer from Germany is getting his dream scholarship for a US college, but is facing the death of his grandfather and the first meeting with his father after 15 years, and can not decide whether he can leave behind his home and family and friends in order to beginning a new life. But time is running out and the acceptance period expires.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2015 at 10:10 pm

    I think it's still too long. The debate 'stay with the family'/'film studies in the US' is implicit. I'm not confortable with the term "nostalgic". Nostalgy is for something you don't have anymore, for exemple an expatriate film director who is nostalgic about his farming roots in germany. The termRead more

    I think it’s still too long. The debate ‘stay with the family’/’film studies in the US’ is implicit. I’m not confortable with the term “nostalgic”. Nostalgy is for something you don’t have anymore, for exemple an expatriate film director who is nostalgic about his farming roots in germany.

    The term writer is vague: i didn’t think at all at a writer for the screen.

    Something like :
    “When a german dreamer is accepted in an famous US film school, he must face the loss of his grandfather and the first meeting with his father to understand what he really wants before the acceptance period expires.”

    And you can do even better, and shorter. Just focus.

    I think the “before the acceptance perdiod expires” is a good thing as a ticking clock that can build interest.

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