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  1. Posted: March 18, 2015In: Public

    The only straight player on an otherwise all-gay football team is engaged to the daughter of a homophobic dinosaur, who just so happens to be the league?s top referee.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2015 at 8:42 pm

    Hello, the idea is good ! Sounds funny. I think you should include something about what is the goal of the hero. In your logline it seem to me that the situation is too static, even if I can easily imagine there can be a lot of potential conflict. Tell what's the story is about.

    Hello, the idea is good ! Sounds funny. I think you should include something about what is the goal of the hero. In your logline it seem to me that the situation is too static, even if I can easily imagine there can be a lot of potential conflict. Tell what’s the story is about.

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  2. Posted: March 18, 2015In: Public

    A nostalgic young writer from Germany is getting his dream scholarship for a US college, but is facing the death of his grandfather and the first meeting with his father after 15 years, and can not decide whether he can leave behind his home and family and friends in order to beginning a new life. But time is running out and the acceptance period expires.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2015 at 8:35 pm

    Hello, welcome to the logline pain process. I understand your story is deep and rich, BUT now you have to come up with the one sentence about 30 words. You have to keep only the main information to tell the main story. Something like: "when a young german wannabe writer is accepted in a prestigiousRead more

    Hello, welcome to the logline pain process. I understand your story is deep and rich, BUT now you have to come up with the one sentence about 30 words. You have to keep only the main information to tell the main story. Something like:

    “when a young german wannabe writer is accepted in a prestigious US college, he must face the death of his grandfather and the first meeting with his father before the acceptance period expires”.

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

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    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 7:48 pm

    If I have to pick one : Estranged couple decides for a hiking therapy where a masked psychopath with a killer dog captures them. They are now forced to confront each other to survive.

    If I have to pick one : Estranged couple decides for a hiking therapy where a masked psychopath with a killer dog captures them. They are now forced to confront each other to survive.

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