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Renee must convince her group to stick to the plan in a future reality show where people die and the only reward is survival.
It seems still a little too vague. Traditionally you don't put names in the logline: http://www.raindance.org/10-tips-for-writing-loglines/ (Because names means nothing and you have do condense a lot of information in a few words).
It seems still a little too vague.
See lessTraditionally you don’t put names in the logline: http://www.raindance.org/10-tips-for-writing-loglines/
(Because names means nothing and you have do condense a lot of information in a few words).
In 'Found Photos' style, a pair of Google Street View car drivers unknowingly take a photo of a dangerous cult performing a ritualistic killing in a remote field and are pursued by them. Detectives are left with an abandoned car and a series of mysterious photos in order to find the pair before it's too late. (Inspired by these types of lists – http://www.viralnova.com/creepiest-things-on-google-maps/
You have a very original idea but not a logline. Something like: "When a pair of Google Street View car drivers disappears, a tenacious detective must analyze the mysterious photos they took in order to find them before it's too late." Or "When a pair of Google Street View car drivers accidentally tRead more
You have a very original idea but not a logline.
Something like:
“When a pair of Google Street View car drivers disappears, a tenacious detective must analyze the mysterious photos they took in order to find them before it’s too late.”
Or
“When a pair of Google Street View car drivers accidentally takes pictures of a strange cult performance and suddenly disappear, a tenacious detective must analyze the mysterious photos they took in order to find them before it’s too late.”
See lessWhen a small town shearer incapable of change falls in love with a backpacker unable to settle down. He must learn to leave his home behind for love to truly flourish.
Interesting. I suggest to find something better than "incapable of change"(it seem too much a blueprint for the real thing)... maybe "a stubburn small town shearer"? You can condense in one sentence. Finally, I think the second part need to be a little more specific: I'm not sure if the movie is aboRead more
Interesting.
I suggest to find something better than “incapable of change”(it seem too much a blueprint for the real thing)… maybe “a stubburn small town shearer”?
You can condense in one sentence.
Finally, I think the second part need to be a little more specific: I’m not sure if the movie is about a searer and a backpacker travelling together or a backpacker who ‘trouble’ the shearer little world. The 2 possibilities are interesting as I expect a lot of conflict due to the strong opposition of the characters.
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