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After escaping from a galactic penal colony, seven prisoners find their bid for freedom has turned into a battle for their survival when they must outwit and out manoeuvre a psychopathic android with holographic, shape shifting abilities intent on re-enacting the twisted deaths he has watched in old horror movies.
"After pulling off an ingenious escape, a futuristic prisoner jumps into the fire when he and his fellow escapee's become hunted by a psychopathic shape shifting battle robot."
“After pulling off an ingenious escape, a futuristic prisoner jumps into the fire when he and his fellow escapee’s become hunted by a psychopathic shape shifting battle robot.”
See lessA syndicated advice columnist fears for her life when a psychotic fan doesn't like the results of her counsel and fixates on the columnist as the source of all her problems.
I like the premise, although in some ways the psychotic fan seems like the more interesting character. I would try to give your lead character something to 'do' in the logline because 'fears for her life' is a bit passive. however I like the idea. Hope that helped, good luck with this!
I like the premise, although in some ways the psychotic fan seems like the more interesting character.
I would try to give your lead character something to ‘do’ in the logline because ‘fears for her life’ is a bit passive. however I like the idea.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessAfter 6 weeks of grieving, a 28 year old widow's family has decided she is coming home for christmas to 'get better', whether she likes it or not.
Louise gives good advice, also the story needs some conflict. ----- "After her husband death a grieving widow returns home for Christmas only to find her meddling family has invited the man she was 'supposed' to marry." ----- Anyway I like your premise, the logline isn't bad just needs tweaking. GooRead more
Louise gives good advice, also the story needs some conflict.
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“After her husband death a grieving widow returns home for Christmas only to find her meddling family has invited the man she was ‘supposed’ to marry.”
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Anyway I like your premise, the logline isn’t bad just needs tweaking. Good luck with this!