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A bullied kid has 1 dream: to become the next big thing in soccer. But what he doesn't know is that there will be sacrifices to make.
you begin with "A bullied kid..." Then don't do anything with it. If being bullied is not important to the storyline, you should drop it from the logline. If being bullied is important to the storyline, the second part of the logline should relate or "Pay off" the first part. Also, you should tell uRead more
you begin with “A bullied kid…” Then don’t do anything with it.
If being bullied is not important to the storyline, you should drop it from the logline.
If being bullied is important to the storyline, the second part of the logline should relate or “Pay off” the first part.
Also, you should tell us what sacrifices has to make, be specific.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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The problem is, you are just describing a scene not really giving us a logline.
The problem is, you are just describing a scene not really giving us a logline.
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"When a notorious pimp discovers he's an informer, a sad sack must turn to the last person he wants, His estranged survivalist wife, if he is to live the week."
“When a notorious pimp discovers he’s an informer, a sad sack must turn to the last person he wants, His estranged survivalist wife, if he is to live the week.”
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