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  1. Posted: November 10, 2013In: Public

    When an elderly man sues a large bank for foreclosing on him due to a data error, he dies of a heart attack in court, and his daughter then brings a wrongful death suit against the same bank.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 12, 2013 at 12:41 pm

    The problem with this logline is, (as read) it switches main characters. It starts as if the father is the main character, then it ends as if the Daughter is the main character. How about something like this: ----- "After her father has a fatal heat attack during a viscous court battle, A determinedRead more

    The problem with this logline is, (as read) it switches main characters. It starts as if the father is the main character, then it ends as if the Daughter is the main character.

    How about something like this:
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    “After her father has a fatal heat attack during a viscous court battle, A determined but inexperienced lawyer takes up her dads foreclosure suit against a greedy but powerful banker.”
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  2. Posted: November 7, 2013In: Public

    A newly divorced Canadian fights for his life in the 1990's East/West Rap War after a chance meeting with Tupac Shakur.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 9, 2013 at 12:31 pm

    After accidentally scratching a legendary gangster rapper's car, a meek Canadian accountant's forced into a freestyle rap battle: The stakes; his life!

    After accidentally scratching a legendary gangster rapper’s car, a meek Canadian accountant’s forced into a freestyle rap battle: The stakes; his life!

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  3. Posted: November 5, 2013In: Public

    A middleaged Canadian in LA, fights for his life when he is caught up in the 1990’s coastal rap war after a chance meeting with a legedary rapstar.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 6, 2013 at 4:32 pm

    Title suggestion: Ice Ice baby

    Title suggestion: Ice Ice baby

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