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  1. Posted: November 21, 2013In: Public

    When a mysterious infatuation turns into an addictive reality show

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 21, 2013 at 7:02 pm

    You have the set up, now you need a main character, a goal and something standing in the way.

    You have the set up, now you need a main character, a goal and something standing in the way.

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  2. Posted: November 17, 2013

    A sexy movie producer returns home for work and is confronted with the reality of what he left behind.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 17, 2013 at 11:40 am

    Be specific and it will pay off. "... confronted with the reality of what he left behind" is too vague. Confronted by the actor he just fired. Confronted by his wife... and mistress. "Confronted with reality" doesn't draw the reader in. Tell us what or who he is confronted with. Hope that helped, goRead more

    Be specific and it will pay off.

    “… confronted with the reality of what he left behind” is too vague.

    Confronted by the actor he just fired.
    Confronted by his wife… and mistress.

    “Confronted with reality” doesn’t draw the reader in. Tell us what or who he is confronted with.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: November 17, 2013In: Public

    After finding out that their teachers have been stealing school funds to create an invention to destroy the world, 4 average-joe students have 10 hours to save the world before geometry class ends.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 17, 2013 at 11:37 am

    From a logline standpoint. A little long and I would suggest a "Main" character to focus on. However; this logline is on the right track. Good luck with this!

    From a logline standpoint. A little long and I would suggest a “Main” character to focus on.

    However; this logline is on the right track.

    Good luck with this!

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