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After his rock musical The Rock Man gets nominated for best musical, a broadway theater director tries to advertise his play so it can win a Tony and he is also struggling with his wife's death
"After his wife's death, a heartbroken director stops a nothing to see the play he dedicated to her win a tony in spite underhanded competition from an arch rival."
“After his wife’s death, a heartbroken director stops a nothing to see the play he dedicated to her win a tony in spite underhanded competition from an arch rival.”
See lessWhen a bumbling businessman's necktie is used to strangle the hostess of a lavish party, he must retrieve his tie before he is implicated in the murder. Unfortunately, both the body and the necktie are missing.
I like this logline, First: We have a lead character. (Bumbling business man) We have an inciting incident that's specific. (Tie used in murder) We have a goal. (Getting the tie back) We have stakes (Indited for murder) -and- We have something standing in the lead's way. (The tie is missing, he mustRead more
I like this logline,
First:
We have a lead character. (Bumbling business man)
We have an inciting incident that’s specific. (Tie used in murder)
We have a goal. (Getting the tie back)
We have stakes (Indited for murder)
-and-
We have something standing in the lead’s way. (The tie is missing, he must search for it, plus it’s implied there is a killer about)
Second: You may be able to leave out … in the murder. Simply saying before he’s implicated is all you need.
Third: My only question: How does he know his necktie was used in the murder if the body is missing???
Anyway, good attempted
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After his necktie’s used to strangle the hostess of a lavish party, a bumbling businessman must retrieve the murder weapon before he’s implicated; unfortunately both the tie and body have disappeared.”
(31 words and no period)
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!!!!
See lessThe summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.
Elly,that sounds like an interesting idea. Oddly enough, creating a logline can sometimes help solidify a story idea. Good luck!
Elly,that sounds like an interesting idea. Oddly enough, creating a logline can sometimes help solidify a story idea. Good luck!
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