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'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'
I like you point DPG, in your evaluation the inciting incident isn't the murder of his friend but "When justice fails" ----- "After failing to extract legal justice for his murdered best friend, a young Pakistani lawyer seeks his own recompense against the powerful, well respected and seemingly untoRead more
I like you point DPG, in your evaluation the inciting incident isn’t the murder of his friend but “When justice fails”
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“After failing to extract legal justice for his murdered best friend, a young Pakistani lawyer seeks his own recompense against the powerful, well respected and seemingly untouchable killer.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
A once academically gifted young man is intent on getting his life back on track. One night while driving home, he?s nearly killed in an accident and falls for the woman who saves him, but her lies and past horror may destroy everything.
Hey hey, I noticed, in the first sentence you give the lead a goal, (Getting his life back on track) then your second sentence doesn't relate to that goal at all. The logline seems disjointed as a result. There are some good elements here and with a little twerking (OK tweaking but that's not as funRead more
Hey hey, I noticed, in the first sentence you give the lead a goal, (Getting his life back on track) then your second sentence doesn’t relate to that goal at all. The logline seems disjointed as a result.
There are some good elements here and with a little twerking (OK tweaking but that’s not as fun 🙂 you could end up with a solid logline
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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