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The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.
If you are going to tell us they are going to "Solve a mystery" you should tell us what that mystery is. A missing girl, a murder, the truth behind a seemingly haunted house. ----- "After his best friend disappears in a notorious haunted house, a young paranormal investigator and his rag tag friendsRead more
If you are going to tell us they are going to “Solve a mystery” you should tell us what that mystery is. A missing girl, a murder, the truth behind a seemingly haunted house.
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“After his best friend disappears in a notorious haunted house, a young paranormal investigator and his rag tag friends dare to spend the night in the hell house to solve the mystery.”
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We have a lead character, an inciting incident, a goal and something (Spending the night in a haunted house) standing in the way of the goal.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See less'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'
It is possible to pursue both themes and if that's the story you wish to tell then that's the story you should tell. However in the logline, if the main story is pursuit of justice and "seeks revenge" is only in the third act. I would leave the "Seeks revenge" angle out of the logline. ----- "AfterRead more
It is possible to pursue both themes and if that’s the story you wish to tell then that’s the story you should tell.
However in the logline, if the main story is pursuit of justice and “seeks revenge” is only in the third act. I would leave the “Seeks revenge” angle out of the logline.
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“After his best friend is murdered, a young Pakistani lawyer seeks justice against the powerful and influential killer who’s seemingly above the law.”
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessA group of rebels fed up with pop culture decide to form a band to rebel against society with music, little did they know they would become one of the most controversial bands of all time.
I love the the idea! As for the logline, I think it works better if they become one of the most "Popular" bands, not "Controversial" In other words; they write a bunch of songs bashing society and the response, "This song is so catchy and easy to dance to..." They get more and more frustrated that pRead more
I love the the idea!
As for the logline, I think it works better if they become one of the most “Popular” bands, not “Controversial”
In other words; they write a bunch of songs bashing society and the response, “This song is so catchy and easy to dance to…” They get more and more frustrated that people aren’t “Getting it”
Mean while they become richer and richer and some of the band members begin acting like the very thing they are condemning.
Hope that helped, great idea, good luck with this!!!
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