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Hannibal and his cannibal crew plan the ultimate heist; Walt Disney's frozen head.
I would think "Fort Knocks" would be the ultimate heist. Not sure from your logline why anyone would want or need Walt Disney's head. You should probably add some motivation to help the reader understand why it's the ultimate heist and why the lead character need Disney's head. Hope that helped, gooRead more
I would think “Fort Knocks” would be the ultimate heist. Not sure from your logline why anyone would want or need Walt Disney’s head.
You should probably add some motivation to help the reader understand why it’s the ultimate heist and why the lead character need Disney’s head.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!!!
See lessSupernatural aliens come to earth seeking the one man who can save their species, so it's a good thing all Johny Beaumont ever wanted to do was leave home. But first he must do battle with The World, So it's a very good thing he is supernatural himself
It probably isn't good to have two different "Out there" concepts. You should chose between, "Aliens" or "Supernatural" because having both is a bit much. Other than that, it isn't clear why your lead must "Battle the world" which seems important to the story so should be explained in the logline. HRead more
It probably isn’t good to have two different “Out there” concepts. You should chose between, “Aliens” or “Supernatural” because having both is a bit much.
Other than that, it isn’t clear why your lead must “Battle the world” which seems important to the story so should be explained in the logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessA girl is pulled over by the police officer who raped her mother 5 years ago. Out of sheer panic she tries to escape.
You have described a scene, but a logline should give us a glimpse of the entire story (Except how it ends) Hope that helped, good luck with this!
You have described a scene, but a logline should give us a glimpse of the entire story (Except how it ends)
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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