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Batman is being sought for the murder of ex-cons, cops, and Rachel Dawes. Commisioner Gordon meets a man named "StrongMan" who tells him he can capture Batman. Mr. Gordon grants him immunity for any crimes he many commit in capturing Batman. However Strongman is working for an underground mob. Due to the events that have unfolded Batman has fallen into a deep depression.
From a story perspective, I don't believe a depressed Batman is necessarily a compelling storyline. Batman should have to take action.
From a story perspective, I don’t believe a depressed Batman is necessarily a compelling storyline. Batman should have to take action.
See lessBatman is being sought for the murder of ex-cons, cops, and Rachel Dawes. Commisioner Gordon meets a man named "StrongMan" who tells him he can capture Batman. Mr. Gordon grants him immunity for any crimes he many commit in capturing Batman. However Strongman is working for an underground mob. Due to the events that have unfolded Batman has fallen into a deep depression.
From a logline perspective, it is hard to tell from your logline who the main character is, Commissioner Gordon, Strongman or Batman.
From a logline perspective, it is hard to tell from your logline who the main character is, Commissioner Gordon, Strongman or Batman.
See lessA special ops team made up of foreign soldiers as well as Americans do special ops missions across the world. until they are setup by their own government, forcing them to go into hiding.
First: I would say, "multinational special ops team" instead of "a special ops team made up of foreign soldiers as well as Americans." (Plus if they are a special ops team you don't need to tell us they do special ops missions) Second: Going into hiding isn't very proactive. Third, if they are multiRead more
First: I would say, “multinational special ops team” instead of “a special ops team made up of foreign soldiers as well as Americans.” (Plus if they are a special ops team you don’t need to tell us they do special ops missions)
Second: Going into hiding isn’t very proactive.
Third, if they are multinational then it would be “Governments” (plural) since they would have no one specific government.
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“When a multinational special ops team is set up by their superiors, they must…” (Then add what they -must do)
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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