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Vibrant animals, big and small roamed over the grey world of Land, Sea and air, however time is running out.
In a logline, it's always better to keep the same tense. You start out past tense then end up present tense. Just something to watch for. As for the rest LRUS made some valid points, I would take his constructive criticism into account. Hope that helped, good luck with this!
In a logline, it’s always better to keep the same tense. You start out past tense then end up present tense. Just something to watch for.
As for the rest LRUS made some valid points, I would take his constructive criticism into account.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessA sleek female sports agent struggles to get her papers from the evils of this world and beyond.
I'm not sure there is enough to go on with this logline. Why does a sports agent need papers? What papers? What will happen if she doesn't get her papers? How do you get papers from the evils of this world and beyond? With a little clarification the readers will have a better understanding of what tRead more
I’m not sure there is enough to go on with this logline.
Why does a sports agent need papers? What papers? What will happen if she doesn’t get her papers? How do you get papers from the evils of this world and beyond?
With a little clarification the readers will have a better understanding of what this story is about and help you sell you story.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessWhen a father and son novice racing team decides to enter the Baja 500 they face challenges to survive not only the race but drug dealers and corrupt Mexican military.
Definitely potential here. First: I can't remember ever seeing a movie about the Baja 500 so that's a plus, Second: the only thing I would add, if you could give us the reason the drug dealers and corrupt Mexican military are after them (Without adding to the word count) it would help the logline HoRead more
Definitely potential here.
First: I can’t remember ever seeing a movie about the Baja 500 so that’s a plus,
Second: the only thing I would add, if you could give us the reason the drug dealers and corrupt Mexican military are after them (Without adding to the word count) it would help the logline
However that’s a small point. Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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