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  1. Posted: September 28, 2013In: Public

    A laid-back man-child?s quest to get rich quick is disrupted when he becomes the legal guardian of a pugnacious twelve year old girl.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 28, 2013 at 2:37 pm

    If your lead became the legal guardian of a twelve year old boy named Richard, the title could be "Get Rich quick." or just "Getting Rich" Of course if your lead was named Richard then "Getting Rich" would also work. Anyway, how about "A self centered conartis's life is turned upside down when he beRead more

    If your lead became the legal guardian of a twelve year old boy named Richard, the title could be “Get Rich quick.” or just “Getting Rich”

    Of course if your lead was named Richard then “Getting Rich” would also work.

    Anyway, how about

    “A self centered conartis’s life is turned upside down when he becomes the legal guardian of a pugnacious twelve year old girl, disrupting his plans to get rich quick.”

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: September 25, 2013In: Public

    A brilliant Russian Cadet shortly after his graduation day is being targeted by the CIA, his respond was a personal travel to NYC to change all well-known war tactics with the help of his genius weapons.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 28, 2013 at 2:14 pm

    After his mentor is kidnapped by the CIA, a brilliant Russian military prodigy must travel to New York and rescue him before the international incident leads to all out nuclear war.

    After his mentor is kidnapped by the CIA, a brilliant Russian military prodigy must travel to New York and rescue him before the international incident leads to all out nuclear war.

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  3. Posted: September 27, 2013In: Public

    A research scientist races against time to stop two earth-altering events: the rapid deterioration of planet Earth?s gravitational field and her family from completely drifting apart.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 28, 2013 at 3:16 am

    Because one of your problems is the potential death of all life on the planet, and the other problem could be fix by demanding to her family, "one night a week we eat a meal together together," it's hard to take the second problem seriously. As a result, the problem of 'her family drifting apart' feRead more

    Because one of your problems is the potential death of all life on the planet, and the other problem could be fix by demanding to her family, “one night a week we eat a meal together together,” it’s hard to take the second problem seriously.

    As a result, the problem of ‘her family drifting apart’ feels more like a B story and as such, even though I can see the correlation between that problem and the title “Gravity” I don’t think it should be in the logline.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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