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  1. Posted: August 5, 2013In: Public

    When a single father to a teenage daughter learns that he has a fatal brain tumor, he takes her on a road trip to find the mother who abandoned her years before and to try to teach her everything she might need over the rest of her life.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 6, 2013 at 3:43 am

    "After diagnosed with a brain tumor, a single father takes his troubled daughter on the road to track down mother who abandoned her."

    “After diagnosed with a brain tumor, a single father takes his troubled daughter on the road to track down mother who abandoned her.”

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2013In: Public

    When an Israelite soldier is killed in the Battle of Aphek, he awakens and is thrown into a vivid, startling world beyond our physical where light and darkness are at constant war with each other.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 5, 2013 at 7:48 am

    Story is conflict (Conflict between the main character and someone or something in his way) There is no conflict in this logline, as a result this isn't a story; it's only the set-up of a story. Now if the main character must choose between good and evil, then there is conflict and it should be addeRead more

    Story is conflict (Conflict between the main character and someone or something in his way)

    There is no conflict in this logline, as a result this isn’t a story; it’s only the set-up of a story.

    Now if the main character must choose between good and evil, then there is conflict and it should be added to the logline.

    “After an Israelite soldier’s killed and awakens to a world where light and darkness are a constant war, he must choose between good and evil when he discovers he’s the tipping point in their eternal war.”

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2013In: Student Loglines

    A young boy living in Australia try's to earn some Money by selling paper's just so he can support his Family

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2013 at 7:40 am

    Good start, It needs that "one more thing" as Axel mentioned. 'When a greedy banker threatens to foreclose, an enterprising young boy attempts to save his home and deadbeat family by selling newspapers." Hope that helped, good luck with this!

    Good start, It needs that “one more thing” as Axel mentioned.

    ‘When a greedy banker threatens to foreclose, an enterprising young boy attempts to save his home and deadbeat family by selling newspapers.”

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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