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  1. Posted: July 31, 2013In: Public

    In exchange for escaping a house haunted by a demon, a group of teenaged friends must vote to decide which one of them must stay behind to be killed.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 31, 2013 at 11:31 am

    Nice concept, Sort of a really twisted breakfast club. Is this a script for a full length movie or a short?

    Nice concept, Sort of a really twisted breakfast club. Is this a script for a full length movie or a short?

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2013In: Public

    A mentally challenged teen who is imprisoned because he accidentally murdered somebody falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment

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    Added an answer on July 31, 2013 at 11:29 am

    First you should try to avoid using the word Mental twice if possible. Second, do mental hospitals have Wardens? I've never been in one but it seems weird. I know prisons have wardens but you would think a mental hospital would have a head doctor. Anyway those are just little details, sounds like aRead more

    First you should try to avoid using the word Mental twice if possible.

    Second, do mental hospitals have Wardens? I’ve never been in one but it seems weird. I know prisons have wardens but you would think a mental hospital would have a head doctor.

    Anyway those are just little details, sounds like a great idea,

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: July 29, 2013In: Public

    An epic love story set in a time where a dying scientist is able to upload his consciousness into the internet and, facing its global implications, must fight against the forces who are actively working against the existence of a singularity.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 30, 2013 at 2:57 pm

    One thing I notice, you begin your logline by telling us this is an epic love story but then nothing you write after indicates it's an epic love story. If this is an epic love story the logline should reflect it. Hope that helped, good luck with this!

    One thing I notice, you begin your logline by telling us this is an epic love story but then nothing you write after indicates it’s an epic love story.

    If this is an epic love story the logline should reflect it.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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