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  1. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 5:54 pm

    Take out 'other'

    Take out ‘other’

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 9:09 am

    How about something like this? ------ "When a shy high school virgin learns he has terminal cancer, it gives him the courage to go after the girl of his dreams" ------- Alternate possible titles: :::Terminally Virgin---Or---Felix Chester comes and goes::: ----- I could see this as a movie where, becRead more

    How about something like this?
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    “When a shy high school virgin learns he has terminal cancer, it gives him the courage to go after the girl of his dreams”
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    Alternate possible titles:

    :::Terminally Virgin—Or—Felix Chester comes and goes:::
    —–

    I could see this as a movie where, because the lead is going to die, it gives him the courage to stand up to those who bullied him as well as say and do things he would never have done if not for dying…. but I wouldn’t add that to the logline.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 8:45 am

    I would second what dpg says, good write up.

    I would second what dpg says, good write up.

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