Adopted; after reading this logline and I realized you wrote it backwards. In a logline you should tell us what’s threatening the lead character, and what he must do, instead you are telling us what is threatening the Registry. (The bad guys)

Such as:
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“When an erratic control officer discovers a conspiracy in the registry, he must escape their assassins if he is to expose the corruption.”
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Now in that version, the threat is against the lead character instead of the Registry.

Of course yours will be different depending on how the registry tries to silence your lead character. (Plus mine didn’t mention the future)

Hope that helped, good luck with this!