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(Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.
"After his wife dies, a grieving biker honors her dying of going straight by quitting crime and forming a neighborhood but he must return to his old ways when a rival gang begins to harass his new found neighbors."
“After his wife dies, a grieving biker honors her dying of going straight by quitting crime and forming a neighborhood but he must return to his old ways when a rival gang begins to harass his new found neighbors.”
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Hello Jean, I am reading this attempt and see where you are going. First I would recommend that you would try to say the same thing but with less words in order to cut the word count down, It is a bit long. Second, your line at the end: "while her father will be won over under pressure from her maidRead more
Hello Jean, I am reading this attempt and see where you are going. First I would recommend that you would try to say the same thing but with less words in order to cut the word count down, It is a bit long.
Second, your line at the end:
“while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.”
This sounds like the ending. I wouldn’t give away the end of the movie during a logline.
While you could say they “struggle to win the approval of her father,” I would let the audience find out if they succeed or not while watching the movie rather than reading the logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessIn order to regain his memories, a reckless entrepreneur must indulge in a powerful hypnotic to overcome trained assassins that know him best.
Hey Callum S. I noticed in your logline you gave your lead two goals. First you say he must regain his memories then you say he must overcome trained assassins. I would change the wording around a bit for clarification. ----- "In order to overcome trained assassins, a reckless entrepreneur must undeRead more
Hey Callum S.
I noticed in your logline you gave your lead two goals. First you say he must regain his memories then you say he must overcome trained assassins.
I would change the wording around a bit for clarification.
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“In order to overcome trained assassins, a reckless entrepreneur must undergo hypnotherapy to regain key lost memories on how to defeat the paid killers.”
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I have to admit I am not sure how regaining lost memories will help him overcome trained assassins. Was your lead once a trained killer in a forgotten part of his life? If so how does he know he forgot those key memories in order to begin his hypnotherapy?
You might want to clarify how regaining lost memories and overcoming assassins correlate to one another.
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“In order to overcome trained assassins, a reckless entrepreneur must undergo hypnotherapy to regain lost memories of life as a trained operative to defeat the paid killers.”
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Hope that helped, Good luck with this!
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