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Due to a train crash, Alice and Phil meet and fall in love; Benjamin discourages, Zelda encourages: three people challenge each other resulting in new lives for all of them with the help of the fourth.
This is confusing... I believe you have a great story in your head but what you wrote doesn't reflect it's potential. Try to add more specific elements to help us understand the story you are trying to tell. Good luck with this.
This is confusing…
I believe you have a great story in your head but what you wrote doesn’t reflect it’s potential. Try to add more specific elements to help us understand the story you are trying to tell.
Good luck with this.
See lessAfter his father gives him a job at their small-town newspaper, a conceited journalist buried in debt investigates a sports drug scandal that implicates his athlete brother.
I believe all the elements are there. Good luck with this!
I believe all the elements are there.
Good luck with this!
See lessUnfaithful man tries to enamor again his wife, who loses her memory in an accident while driving to the divorce case.
This idea is interesting but the words are jumbled in a weird way making it awkward to read. "Unfaithful man tries to enamor again his wife..." This needs to be changed "Who..." This should be "When" "...loses her memory in an accident while driving to the divorce case." I would start with this. ---Read more
This idea is interesting but the words are jumbled in a weird way making it awkward to read.
“Unfaithful man tries to enamor again his wife…” This needs to be changed
“Who…” This should be “When”
“…loses her memory in an accident while driving to the divorce case.” I would start with this.
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“When his wife loses her memory in an accident while driving to sign their divorce papers, and unfaithful man gets a second chance to win her back before she recovers her memories.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!