1. Posted: April 26, 2013In:

    "A former modesty blaise hitman, now a seemingly warm hearted grand ma agrees to teach a ice princess how to fight, when one of her gay friends gets smashed by her criminal ex-boyfriend and she now must stop him before the one she loves becomes the victim of his jealousy/ control needs"

    Richiev Singularity

    Just curious, is the lead character the hitman or the ice princess?

    Just curious, is the lead character the hitman or the ice princess?

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2013In:

    When a Mafia leader goes to jail, his impulsive shopaholic housewife must assume the role of mafia boss and finish his last deadly mission without jeopardize the rest of the family.

    Richiev Singularity

    In a logline you should start with the main character in order to show, right off the bat, who's the main character. "When a shopaholic mafia wife's husband goes to jail she must..." Hope that helped, good luck with this!

    In a logline you should start with the main character in order to show, right off the bat, who’s the main character.

    “When a shopaholic mafia wife’s husband goes to jail she must…”

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: April 24, 2013In:

    The Greek gods and goddesses from myth are very much real, callous, and they are all coming for an unsuspecting 16-year-old Alexandra Adler, whether she likes it or not.

    Richiev Singularity

    Had to fix my typo: When a sixteen-year-old girl discovers the ancient Greek gods are hunting her she must (do this) in order to (prevent this)

    Had to fix my typo:

    When a sixteen-year-old girl discovers the ancient Greek gods are hunting her she must (do this) in order to (prevent this)

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