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While on his first assignment covering a string of alleged UFO abductions, a tabloid journalist stumbles on what could be the story that makes his career when he discovers Point of Interest 9 ? One of nine mysterious mansions that have sprang up across the globe over night.
There are so much to the story it's hard to narrow down a logine :) 1) I would start with your first line, "While on his first assignment" I would change to "Rookie" "When a rookie tabloid journalist is sent to investigate a string of UFO abductions..." 2) I would then cut: "stumbles on what could bRead more
There are so much to the story it’s hard to narrow down a logine 🙂
1) I would start with your first line, “While on his first assignment” I would change to “Rookie”
“When a rookie tabloid journalist is sent to investigate a string of UFO abductions…”
2) I would then cut: “stumbles on what could be the story that makes his career”
“When a rookie tabloid journalist investigates a string of UFO abductions, he discovers point of interest 9…”
3) Then I would add something like: “Now he must (Do this) if he if he wants (This)”
I know that’s vague but I hope it helps.
See lessWhile on his first assignment covering a string of alleged UFO abductions, a tabloid journalist stumbles on what could be the story that makes his career when he discovers Point of Interest 9 ? One of nine mysterious mansions that have sprang up across the globe over night.
Is this already written or are you testing the premise?
Is this already written or are you testing the premise?
See lessAfter his band loses their only booking, a narcissistic musician goes back in time to steal hits before they're famous. But when his scheme leads Kurt Cornell, his musical idol, to suicidal depression, he must overcome his own lust for fame in order to save Kurt's life.
btw, I love the premise, good luck with this!
btw, I love the premise, good luck with this!
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