1. Posted: February 18, 2013In:

    Tasked with questioning the validity of a hoax, a tenacious physicist is forced to push the limitations of modern science, while the impostors face death row.

    Richiev Singularity

    I can't quite tell if I like this idea or not. The phrase, "questioning validity of a hoax" seems a bit awkward. The phrase, "Push the limitations of modern science" tells us very little about what is going on, is it "time travel?" is it "reanimating dead tissue?" I have know idea from your logline.Read more

    I can’t quite tell if I like this idea or not.

    The phrase, “questioning validity of a hoax” seems a bit awkward.

    The phrase, “Push the limitations of modern science” tells us very little about what is going on, is it “time travel?” is it “reanimating dead tissue?” I have know idea from your logline.

    However it could also be a great idea, I just don’t know enough about the story from this logline.

    Good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: February 19, 2013In:

    2366: Earth is on the verge of collapse and the wealthy Convert themselves into android bodies for life extension to travel to New Earth, 103 years away. When Conversion for a corrupt detective finds him malfunctioning on a garbage tip and his family nowhere in sight he has three days to repair his body, find his family and get on the ship to New Earth before it leaves.

    Richiev Singularity

    What's a "Garbage tip"? Is that like a dump?

    What’s a “Garbage tip”?

    Is that like a dump?

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  3. Posted: February 18, 2013In:

    While on his first assignment covering a string of alleged UFO abductions, a tabloid journalist stumbles on what could be the story that makes his career when he discovers Point of Interest 9 ? One of nine mysterious mansions that have sprang up across the globe over night.

    Richiev Singularity

    Steal away, besides I was just taking what you wrote and narrowing it down a bit.

    Steal away, besides I was just taking what you wrote and narrowing it down a bit.

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