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Three philanthropic con-men navigate the dating world.
What is their goal and who is standing in their way?
What is their goal and who is standing in their way?
See lessAfter his band loses their only booking, a narcissistic musician goes back in time to steal hits before they're famous. But when his scheme leads Kurt Cornell, his musical idol, to suicidal depression, he must overcome his own lust for fame in order to save Kurt's life.
In order to cut the word count I would get rid of the first line, "After his band loses their only booking," and start from that point.
In order to cut the word count I would get rid of the first line, “After his band loses their only booking,”
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An amateur journalist, a superstitious scientist, and a teen know-it-all, unravel the mysteries of a mansion in the woods which is being guarded by a secret government agency.
How about: "When a skeptical tabloid journalist, who's covered one fantastical hoax after another, arrives at a supposedly haunted mansion, he finds to his surprise something supernatural is happening and get the story he must dig deeper." I know, my attempt is a little long.
How about:
“When a skeptical tabloid journalist, who’s covered one fantastical hoax after another, arrives at a supposedly haunted mansion, he finds to his surprise something supernatural is happening and get the story he must dig deeper.”
I know, my attempt is a little long.
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