1. Posted: February 14, 2013In:

    When an honest high school football star kills a young woman while driving drunk, his morals are put to the test when those he respects cover up the crime.

    Richiev Singularity

    Kinda testing this idea to see if it has legs.

    Kinda testing this idea to see if it has legs.

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  2. Posted: February 14, 2013In:

    When friends miss their hotel reservation, they seek refuge from snowstorm in abandoned factory only to fight for survival against ancient witch hiding there.

    Richiev Singularity

    I would cut the part about missing their hotel reservation. It isn't needed for the logline and just adds to the word count. "When several friends seek refuge from a snowstorm in an abandoned factory...." Hope that helps, good luck!

    I would cut the part about missing their hotel reservation. It isn’t needed for the logline and just adds to the word count.

    “When several friends seek refuge from a snowstorm in an abandoned factory….”

    Hope that helps, good luck!

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  3. Posted: February 13, 2013In:

    After a hostage is taken in botched drug heist it falls to his insecure gangland girlfriend to unravel the truth from the lies and get her man out alive.

    Richiev Singularity

    I was thinking it might need the bad guy. Up to you though. When her boyfriend is taken hostage by (Bad Guy) in a botched drug heist..."

    I was thinking it might need the bad guy. Up to you though.

    When her boyfriend is taken hostage by (Bad Guy) in a botched drug heist…”

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