1. Posted: February 19, 2013In:

    2366: Earth is on the verge of collapse and the wealthy Convert themselves into android bodies for life extension to travel to New Earth, 103 years away. When Conversion for a corrupt detective finds him malfunctioning on a garbage tip and his family nowhere in sight he has three days to repair his body, find his family and get on the ship to New Earth before it leaves.

    Richiev Singularity

    Alright, how about this: ----- "After awakening in a garbage dump and his android body malfunctioning, a detective has three days to find his missing family if they're to escape the dying Earth in a seed ship." ----- Be warned, Kurt Russel did a movie called "Soldier" where his character awoke in aRead more

    Alright, how about this:
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    “After awakening in a garbage dump and his android body malfunctioning, a detective has three days to find his missing family if they’re to escape the dying Earth in a seed ship.”

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    Be warned, Kurt Russel did a movie called “Soldier” where his character awoke in a garbage dump. (Completely different main character so you should be fine but you might want to check it out)

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  2. Posted: February 19, 2013In:

    Faced with losing joint custody of his son, a puritan leather worker is forced to cater to the undervalued S&M market in his country town.

    Richiev Singularity

    lol, My opinion, don't change a word Nailed it.

    lol, My opinion, don’t change a word

    Nailed it.

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  3. Posted: February 19, 2013In:

    When his ball busting ex-wife?s abrupt advice becomes a sensation, a beleaguered radio producer must swallow pride and mend fences before his stations ratings plummet back to the cellar.

    Richiev Singularity

    Thanks Nicholas, I was worried that would be the case. ----- The radio station has an advice show. The ex-wife comes to the station to yell at her ex for missing their sons soccer game. The host of the show's an alcoholic and passes out while on air. The ex-jumps on the mike and saves the day by givRead more

    Thanks Nicholas, I was worried that would be the case.
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    The radio station has an advice show.

    The ex-wife comes to the station to yell at her ex for missing their sons soccer game.

    The host of the show’s an alcoholic and passes out while on air.

    The ex-jumps on the mike and saves the day by giving crazy, ‘in your face’ advice.

    Suddenly the rating skyrocket.

    But the two don’t get along so if the producer wants the ratings to continue he has to find a way to bury the hatchet with his ex even though they hate each other.

    The alternative is the radio station goes out of business and everyone loses their jobs.

    Now, exactly how I say all that in one sentence led me to the first attempt.

    I wasn’t sure how much of that would get across but I think you were right on point with your advice, thanks.

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