1. Posted: February 22, 2013In:

    When thousands are trapped in the world's most popular MMO, a burnt-out game master must learn to play the game she once ruled in order track down a hacker with a grudge, before he uses the first Boss event to threaten the entire server.

    Richiev Singularity

    I have seen books along these lines, like "Net of dreams," but not a movie, so I think this is a cool idea for a movie. As for you logline how about this: "When players become trapped in the worlds most popular MMO, a burnt-out game master must relearn the game in order to track a hacker before he uRead more

    I have seen books along these lines, like “Net of dreams,” but not a movie, so I think this is a cool idea for a movie.

    As for you logline how about this:

    “When players become trapped in the worlds most popular MMO, a burnt-out game master must relearn the game in order to track a hacker before he unleashes a deadly boss that will threaten the entire server.”

    I tried to whittle down what you wrote but even my attempt is a little long.

    Hope this helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2013In:

    The night New York City loses containment on the Zombie outbreak, the rookie member of a Covert Zombie Suppression Team must escort the plague's original carrier to a secure location for testing.

    Richiev Singularity

    Just curious; transporting Patient Zero sounds important. Why is the job handed to a rookie?

    Just curious; transporting Patient Zero sounds important. Why is the job handed to a rookie?

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2013In:

    In a post-apocalyptic wasteland, a rogue munitions runner teams up with a failed government experiment and a resistance fighter to find his lost brother and help them end a brutal research project that experiments on children.

    Richiev Singularity

    While the goal seems solid, the way you describe the three protagonists is confusing. I have know Idea what a rogue munitions runner is. Saying, "A failed government experiment" is confusing and it took me reading it a second time to realize you were talking about a person. While 'resistance fighterRead more

    While the goal seems solid, the way you describe the three protagonists is confusing.

    I have know Idea what a rogue munitions runner is.

    Saying, “A failed government experiment” is confusing and it took me reading it a second time to realize you were talking about a person.

    While ‘resistance fighter’ is more clear, who is he fighting against? In fact you haven’t told us who is experimenting on the children. Who is the bad guy?

    I think you have an idea here but with a re-write it could become more clear as to what is going on.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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