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A mature man who tries to balance working his normal job in the day while working on torturing young woman at night.
You have described a situation and it's an intriguing situation. However this isn't quite a logline yet. Story is conflict. The logline must describe the main conflict. In your logline he goes to work (Everything is fine) he comes home and tortures a woman (Everything is fine) Nothing seems to be stRead more
You have described a situation and it’s an intriguing situation. However this isn’t quite a logline yet.
Story is conflict.
The logline must describe the main conflict. In your logline he goes to work (Everything is fine) he comes home and tortures a woman (Everything is fine) Nothing seems to be standing in his way. There is no conflict.
Is the woman fighting back?
Does he have a nosy neighbor?
Does the woman he’s torturing have a boyfriend who’s snooping around?
I think you have something here but the logline needs some work. Good luck with this.
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What other readers think I mean.
What other readers think I mean.
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That's good, a little long; but if you take anything out I think you will start to lose what makes your story unique. I am curious what other readers it think.
That’s good, a little long; but if you take anything out I think you will start to lose what makes your story unique.
I am curious what other readers it think.
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