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Two blood testy women killer brothers, must face each other when One fall inlove with a woman
You might try to re-write the logline using different words. It took me about 5 tries to unravel your sentence. That is not a criticism of the premise, it's just that the logline is a bit hard to read. And that is what re-writing is for. Keep working on this, and good luck.
You might try to re-write the logline using different words. It took me about 5 tries to unravel your sentence. That is not a criticism of the premise, it’s just that the logline is a bit hard to read. And that is what re-writing is for. Keep working on this, and good luck.
See lessThe global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered.
Five exorcists from different faiths unite to combat a global increase in demonic possession. (In your logline you also say, to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered... but that sentence is vague, so I dropped it.) Is this a movie or TV show?
Five exorcists from different faiths unite to combat a global increase in demonic possession.
(In your logline you also say, to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered… but that sentence is vague, so I dropped it.)
Is this a movie or TV show?
See lessWhen his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his injured brother through a dense forest and back to safety.
I like the premise and I think your logline is pretty solid. ----- "When his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head while camping in the Blue Mountains, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his brother through dense forest, and dangerous animals, all with bad weather on the way." ----- YoRead more
I like the premise and I think your logline is pretty solid.
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“When his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head while camping in the Blue Mountains, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his brother through dense forest, and dangerous animals, all with bad weather on the way.”
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You should check out a 70s movie called “Walkabout.” It has a similar premise, however, your story ups the stakes with the head injury and the lead character also being hearing impaired.
Great Idea, good luck with this!
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