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You are describing a scene, not a story... However, if this is a short film, disregard what I just said and work on condensing the logline to 25-35 words.
You are describing a scene, not a story…
However, if this is a short film, disregard what I just said and work on condensing the logline to 25-35 words.
See lessWhen a young lady realized that her mom needs a heart donation, she straggles against time to find any donator, timing is running and she is willing to find it, even of worse possible way.
"When her mom needs a heart transplant and time is running out, a desperate medical student determines to get the heart by any means necessary."
“When her mom needs a heart transplant and time is running out, a desperate medical student determines to get the heart by any means necessary.”
See lessCultures collide when a flat-footed reservist deployed as a guard befriends a rebellious enemy and must protect them from a sleepy small-town intent on financial gain from an influx of Japanese prisoners of war.
I figured out where the issue lies. You first used the word 'enemy' which can be both plural or singular, for instance in the war the Japanese (Plural) was the enemy. However, a single person could also be your enemy. Then after that, you use 'Them' which can be both singular an plural. So if you chRead more
I figured out where the issue lies. You first used the word ‘enemy’ which can be both plural or singular, for instance in the war the Japanese (Plural) was the enemy. However, a single person could also be your enemy. Then after that, you use ‘Them’ which can be both singular an plural. So if you change the first description you can easily clarify.
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“Cultures collide when a flat-footed reservist deployed as a guard befriends a rebellious prisoner of war and must protect them from a sleepy small-town intent on financial gain from the local Japanese internment camp.”
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Hope that helped