1. Posted: November 15, 2012In:

    The President's Chopper crashes over enemy's territory, he must fight his way out or be killed.

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    How about this: "When the American President crashes in enemy territory, he must fight he way out before his opportunistic vice president declares himself the commander in chief."

    How about this:

    “When the American President crashes in enemy territory, he must fight he way out before his opportunistic vice president declares himself the commander in chief.”

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  2. Posted: November 16, 2012In:

    In the small harbor town of Boothbay, Maine, older married couple Phillip and Barbra who are both unhappy in their marriage, the young newlywed couple Doug and Sarah who just moved in next door, and longtime neighbor John that?s still hung up on his deceased wife, enter the Wife Carrying Contest after Sarah, a rookie psychologist, tells Barbra it will strengthen her marriage!

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    A little long for a logline but It caught my interest because I've never heard of a wife carrying contest. (Not even sure what it is) "An unhappy couple enter a small town wife carrying contest in hopes it will revitalize their marriage."

    A little long for a logline but It caught my interest because I’ve never heard of a wife carrying contest. (Not even sure what it is)

    “An unhappy couple enter a small town wife carrying contest in hopes it will revitalize their marriage.”

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  3. Posted: November 13, 2012In:

    A brilliant, genetically engineered con-artist has three days to find the scientist who programmed her to die on her twenty first birthday.

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    Just curious? Why did she procrastinate so long, I would have started searching years before if i'd been programmed to die.

    Just curious? Why did she procrastinate so long, I would have started searching years before if i’d been programmed to die.

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