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Young twin girls in ancient Egypt discover adoption records after their step-mother’s murder and sending a plea to the Pharaoh he is forced to pay for his past karma.
What is the plea? What is the Karma that must be paid for? Also; who is the lead character, the girls or the Pharaoh? The logline reads like the girls are the lead character, however, it seems like the Pharaoh is the one whom the story is about. He had past bad Karma, he gets a plea from the twin giRead more
What is the plea?
What is the Karma that must be paid for?
Also; who is the lead character, the girls or the Pharaoh? The logline reads like the girls are the lead character, however, it seems like the Pharaoh is the one whom the story is about. He had past bad Karma, he gets a plea from the twin girls now he must do something about his past Karma before something bad happens to him.
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What is the lead character's goal? What is standing in her way?
What is the lead character’s goal?
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A college student wakes up in a world where the laws of nature can be rewritten and must find a way to escape before he is trapped indefinitely.
Your lead has this very big problem: Getting transported to an alternate universe.Then your lead has this very little problem: He has an examSo the goal is to get back before his exam.Either, you should show in the logline why this exam is the most important thing in you lead characters life. If heRead more
Your lead has this very big problem: Getting transported to an alternate universe.
Then your lead has this very little problem: He has an exam
So the goal is to get back before his exam.
Either, you should show in the logline why this exam is the most important thing in you lead characters life. If he fails something bad and life altering will happen.
Or, you should give us some other motivation.
Because right not the logline is unbalanced. (I mean the lead character seems to have bigger fish to fry than just taking an exam)
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