1. Posted: April 29, 2017In:

    Pregnant, with a two year old, unfamiliar with her husband?s home country, a horrific accident changes everything, he survives with no memory of where he is and the new life he has started to build in Australia, she quickly becomes his only thread in his new country full of strangers and strange ways.

    Richiev Singularity

    In a story the inciting incident leads to a goal After her husbands horrific accident a housewife unfamiliar with Australia?must... Now we need a goal for the lead character.

    In a story the inciting incident leads to a goal

    After her husbands horrific accident a housewife unfamiliar with Australia?must…

    Now we need a goal for the lead character.

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  2. Posted: April 29, 2017In:

    When her main bread winner is fired, a maverick celebrity agent must battle her industry rivals and reinvent herself to save her business from impending financial ruin.

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    I don't think the plot should be to re-invent herself. It should be to re-invent the client who was fired. After all, now that her client is fired it will be up to her to get him a new job.

    I don’t think the plot should be to re-invent herself. It should be to re-invent the client who was fired. After all, now that her client is fired it will be up to her to get him a new job.

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  3. Posted: April 29, 2017In:

    When a Maori tribe surrounds another, a young Maori warrior who is mute rises up and earns a terrifying reputation until he meets an English female doctor who leads him down a path of love and self-discovery.

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    What is the lead characters goal?

    What is the lead characters goal?

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