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  1. Posted: June 15, 2015In: Public

    A reformed bully returns for his school reunion, falling into a deadly trap, as he and his friends are hunted down by an old victim.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 9:48 am

    "When his best friend is killed at their 10 year reunion, a reformed bully must discover which of his old gangs high school victim's revenge has turned to murder." or (without the word 'revenge') "When his best friend is killed at their 10 year reunion, a reformed bully must discover which of his olRead more

    “When his best friend is killed at their 10 year reunion, a reformed bully must discover which of his old gangs high school victim’s revenge has turned to murder.”

    or (without the word ‘revenge’)

    “When his best friend is killed at their 10 year reunion, a reformed bully must discover which of his old gangs high school victims has turned to murder.”

    or (without ‘old gang’)

    “When his best friend is killed at their 10 year reunion, a reformed bully must discover which of his high school victims has turned to murder.”

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: June 15, 2015In: Public

    A monster turns on his creator, leaving the creator's son to hunt it down before it can find his sister and make her it's bride.

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    Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 9:38 am

    "When his scientist father is murdered by his own creation, a pacifistic hacker is forced to hunt down the creature when it's discovered the next target is his sister."

    “When his scientist father is murdered by his own creation, a pacifistic hacker is forced to hunt down the creature when it’s discovered the next target is his sister.”

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  3. Posted: June 13, 2015In: Public

    With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they both fight to bring justice to the southland.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 13, 2015 at 11:19 am

    Good advice from DPG above. also, It would help if there was a specific bad guy or boss terrorizing LA. (Not a general increase in crime) It would also help if that bad guy was the one who killed the former DA. It would then help if it was personal for the new DA; the bad guy possibly kidnaps or kilRead more

    Good advice from DPG above.

    also,

    It would help if there was a specific bad guy or boss terrorizing LA. (Not a general increase in crime)

    It would also help if that bad guy was the one who killed the former DA.

    It would then help if it was personal for the new DA; the bad guy possibly kidnaps or kills someone close to the new DA.

    This event would trigger the story and now both the DA and the Ghost have personal stakes in getting the bad guy.

    Just some thoughts, hope that helped.
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    “When his mentor is killed, a rookie DA teams with the ghost of his former friend to track down the Mob Boss who is reeking havoc on the streets of LA.”

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