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After a mysterious new classmate places a curse on them, two teenage boys are forced to take action and unlock insidious secrets about their quaint Southern town and master their newly found gifts.
You should tell us what the curse is since the entire story revolves around it.
You should tell us what the curse is since the entire story revolves around it.
See lessAn underachieving middle school math teacher who never left home is forced to reconsider his life choices when his ex high-school sweetheart, now, an international movie star visits their hometown.
Things like, 'force to reconsider his life choices' don't work well in loglines. You are better off telling us what 'action' he takes instead. Take High Fidelity, a movie with John Cusack. You could say "After his girlfriend dumps him an eccentric record store owner is force to reconsider his choiceRead more
Things like, ‘force to reconsider his life choices’ don’t work well in loglines.
You are better off telling us what ‘action’ he takes instead.
Take High Fidelity, a movie with John Cusack. You could say “After his girlfriend dumps him an eccentric record store owner is force to reconsider his choices in life”
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You could tell us what action the character takes. “After his girlfriend dumps him, an eccentric record story owner visits his past girlfriends to discover what when wrong.
Action; he visits past girlfriends.
So in your story, when his high school sweetheart comes to town and he reconsiders his life choices, what action does this prompt, what does the character do? That should be your logline.
Hope this helps, good luck with this!
See lessOn the verge of losing his job, a young record executive is assigned the task of reuniting a group of middle-aged losers, who formerly comprised an infamous, long-forgotten boy band.
I guess, my first thought would be, if the boy band is long-forgotten, why is anyone in the record industry looking to reunite them. You are better off with a hugely popular boy band who have vowed never to play again. Now the exec must get them to put aside all their old arguments and reunite or loRead more
I guess, my first thought would be, if the boy band is long-forgotten, why is anyone in the record industry looking to reunite them.
You are better off with a hugely popular boy band who have vowed never to play again. Now the exec must get them to put aside all their old arguments and reunite or lose his job.
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