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When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.
I have always thought that a diaspora is when a large group of people are forced to leave their homeland.
I have always thought that a diaspora is when a large group of people are forced to leave their homeland.
See lessWhen a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.
Embroiled in a conspiracy, (Be specific, what conspiracy) an American x-diaspora-x (not sure if this is the correct word) x-with a turbulent past-x (Don't need to tell us this in the logline) must prove his loyalty to a major Japanese crime syndicate (By doing this). How about something like this: (Read more
Embroiled in a conspiracy, (Be specific, what conspiracy) an American x-diaspora-x (not sure if this is the correct word) x-with a turbulent past-x (Don’t need to tell us this in the logline) must prove his loyalty to a major Japanese crime syndicate (By doing this).
How about something like this: (your’s will be different of course)
“Embroiled in a conspiracy to take down the stock market, a troubled American ex-patriot must prove his loyalty to the Yakuza by killing the head of the national bank; his former mentor.”
See lessWhen three young men apart of the lad sub-culture beat up a civilian and steal his friend's camera, we become a fly-on-the-wall as we see what drives these three young men to do what they do as tensions arise as the night winds down, it leads to an implosion which devastates the community around them.
I like the idea, however you don't need to go so far into detail about the camera You Wrote: When three young men apart of the lad sub-culture beat up a civilian and steal his friend's camera... How about: After stealing a camera, three lad culture hooligans... While stealing the camera is importantRead more
I like the idea, however you don’t need to go so far into detail about the camera
You Wrote: When three young men apart of the lad sub-culture beat up a civilian and steal his friend’s camera…
How about: After stealing a camera, three lad culture hooligans…
While stealing the camera is important to the logline in order to let us know it will be a found footage film, just tell us they stole it and move on to the essence of the story.
hope that helps, good luck with this!
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