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When her only daughter intends to get married within a month, 50 yrs old widow Neela, who has deep fear of loneliness, must become aware of this fear by stop denying it and then try to face and overcome this fear by accepting the truth that we are all alone so that she can give consent to her daughter's marriage.
Things like, 'must become aware' are intangible and while good for character growth don't add to the logline. You should have a tangible goal and let the audience find out for themselves the lead character has grown after reading the script but don't put it in the logline. ===== "When her only daughRead more
Things like, ‘must become aware’ are intangible and while good for character growth don’t add to the logline. You should have a tangible goal and let the audience find out for themselves the lead character has grown after reading the script but don’t put it in the logline.
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“When her only daughter get’s engaged, a widow with abandonment issues secretly sabotages the wedding while pretending to support the bride.”
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Now at the end of the movie she will grow realize we are all alone and give her consent, that’s the character arc but let the audience discover it while reading the script. You don’t have to place it in the logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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This is interesting, I wrote a script years ago about the first Caucasian basketball player to play in the NBA. In that reality whites came on slave ships from England and America was founded by Africans. This sounds a bit more serious, my story was a comedy.
This is interesting, I wrote a script years ago about the first Caucasian basketball player to play in the NBA. In that reality whites came on slave ships from England and America was founded by Africans.
This sounds a bit more serious, my story was a comedy.
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You might want to avoid using the term 'futuristic' unless the story takes place in the present (2015) Because 'futuristic' mean something that exist in the present which is ahead of it's time.
You might want to avoid using the term ‘futuristic’ unless the story takes place in the present (2015)
Because ‘futuristic’ mean something that exist in the present which is ahead of it’s time.
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